Sunday, July 13, 2008

Monday Morning

Content, thoughtful, creative, happy, longing to be elsewhere.
Looking at my list of projects to finish, lacking focus, distracted here.
Turn on my iPod to drown out wandering thoughts, so I can work.
I hear something soulful and jazzy that takes me elsewhere, but makes it worse.
Longing to work on dreams and fantasy.

5 comments:

Beaman said...

Your very first post on a new blog. This is great. Get those poetic juices boiling. ;-)

Nunyaa said...

Your words make writing look easy, I like this one :-)

Beamer said...

I am not a big fan of this one and I think it all has to do with the spacing. If I sound it out it sounds much better than it looks for I am controlling the speed (spacing) at which the lines get read. Christ dude, it's the Internet. Space those words out and make them each have strength and a voice. I thinks its a good start.

Just my opinion.

Beamer

Beamer said...

now check out

http://nunyaax.blogspot.com/search?q=tick+tock

Se the difference. You have ALL the room in the world.

Thanks for sharing though.

Beamer

Scott Killen said...

I like the spacing--all jammed up, just like Monday morning. Excellent!